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On my own feeling lonely,

Tension building up inside,

Hurting deep down,

And trying to hide,

All the sadness within,

From the people who cared,

Not knowing how to explain,

The thoughts in my head,

So I blocked everyone out,

It was for the best,

I put on a smile,

So that no-one would guess,

That at home in my room,

I would cry on the floor,

But the tears didn’t help,

I needed a cure,

So I picked up my razor,

And thought of self-harm,

Then slashed at my wrist,

Made blood pour from my arm,

It was a release,

From my tension and pain,

The feelings flowed out,

With the blood from my veins,

The flesh on my wrist,

Was torn and was red,

But then I felt better,

For clearing my head,

From all the emotion,

Which was locked deep inside,

Now it’s only the scars,

That I’m trying to hide...
©2008-2009 ~Bogan-Mum
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Author's Comments

I want to make this clear to all - THIS. IS. NOT. MY. WORK.

My younger sister (yeah I love her to bits and never shut up about her) wrote this untiltled poem during a rough patch in her life. It turns out she's been sitting on some major poetic talent for quite some time without my knowledge. She'd love to hear anything ya'll have to say on this because she's never actually posted her work anywhere before, so please feel free to comment!

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Kimmy!!!!!
Awww such a sad poem. :cries:
I've always loved to read poem and stories, and see artwork were the author/artist has been able to express their emotions through their trade. This is exactly that. I would love to see more of your work Kim.

Oh hi Bogan-Mum (waves)

--
House: "You're wearing that shirt for someone."
Wilson: "The Health Department. They frown on topless oncology."

- House - Frozen
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Hiya!

Kim now has her own account under the name Bogan-Sister. Only, she's too lazy to manage it so I do all the uploading and such. Speaking of which, she's given me three just now that I have to get cracking on. I'll pass on the message though!

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When the going gets tough, the tough make tea!

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